an ffxi comic i wrote

[jiang]

dunno if this goes here or not

but tell me what you think

http://uploaded.interestingnonethele...Izzy/cinuc.gif

[Vobent]

My god, it's like looking into the past.

[Eaglestrike]

I think I find it funny because I think that's been a real conversation between you two.

[Rainbowsax]

Great stuff . Longer than I expected which is always better. Reminds me of when I played too lol.

[Charla]

The mention of basket weaving was a nice touch.

edit: apparently I'm retarded and don't know art when I see it. And I never have any idea what I'm talking about.

[miokomioko]

The mention of basket weaving was a nice touch.

If that's the extent of your sketching skills, you might want to think about making it a sprite comic. No offense or anything.

It's called "style" and it's good.

[Hellboy]

this reminds me of the time i brutally murdered children, but in a good way

thumbs up!

[Jefe]

Google [bot] approves.

[Senoska]

The mention of basket weaving was a nice touch.

If that's the extent of your sketching skills, you might want to think about making it a sprite comic. No offense or anything.

No.


It's a great style, I love it. Keep up the good work, love the way you draw

[jiang]

The mention of basket weaving was a nice touch.

If that's the extent of your sketching skills, you might want to think about making it a sprite comic. No offense or anything.

not sure what you mean. not to gloat, but i think its a little bit obvious i can do more than what i showed there

but yea, i was thinking of touching it up more, but i decided against it because i liked the deliberate feel to it

[Jeryhn]

If that's the extent of your sketching skills, you might want to think about making it a sprite comic. No offense or anything.

You're a bit retarded.

I'd love to read more.

[dekamii]

i agree too... it's a style of his own and the first impression didn't really intimidate my eyes. i say it's a good style to begin with and there is always room for improvement. :D keep up the good work man

[Burginator]

If that's the extent of your sketching skills, you might want to think about making it a sprite comic. No offense or anything.

You're a bit retarded.

I'd love to read more.

Charla obviously had no idea what he/she/it is talking about. That is a very unique style, and I dig it. Moar.

[Elcura]

I love it, I really want to see more.

[Huggo]

If that's the extent of your sketching skills, you might want to think about making it a sprite comic. No offense or anything.

You're a bit retarded.

I'd love to read more.

Charla obviously had no idea what he/she/it is talking about. That is a very unique style, and I dig it. Moar.

When DOES she really?

[Priran]

an ffxi

[jiang]

jeez no need to jump on that guys case, in fact i encourage more criticism because ill never get good at this crap unless people tear my work up to pieces.

an ffxi

the articles "an" and "a" are used in our stupid language to distinguish between a word that begins with a consonant sound or a vowel sound. if i had said "final fantasy" comic, then i would have used "a", however since I said "ffxi" which is pronounced "eff eff ex eye" i used "an". say it outloud; an fits ffxi better imo

an xray vs a xray. xray starts with a consonant.\
say "an user" vs "a user" outloud, sounds pretty retarded, huh?

[Fhqwghads]

An hero?

(P.s. comic was pretty good.)

[MisterBob]

jeez no need to jump on that guys case, in fact i encourage more criticism because ill never get good at this crap unless people tear my work up to pieces.

an ffxi

the articles "an" and "a" are used in our stupid language to distinguish between a word that begins with a consonant sound or a vowel sound. if i had said "final fantasy" comic, then i would have used "a", however since I said "ffxi" which is pronounced "eff eff ex eye" i used "an". say it outloud; an fits ffxi better imo

an xray vs a xray. xray starts with a consonant.\
say "an user" vs "a user" outloud, sounds pretty retarded, huh?

Correct.

[Kaylia]

Too many unneeded "fuck"/"fucking" imo