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[Eticket]

http://singmeeyeofthetiger.blogspot..../to-start.html

What do you guys think? I'm not super smart or a great writer. I tried my best.

Content-wise, it's amazing. As far as grammatical accuracy, I only noticed a couple of small things. Some of the phrasing was a bit repetitive, ie: "ripe old age" but overall it's a good read and I'm definitely interested in reading the rest.

[aethyr]

Myrrh, my airship tunnel companion.

I'm your first follower on your new blog apparently. Woo! It's off to a good start and I'm sure we're in for some gut-wrenching, touching and fucked up stories. Like Eticket mentioned, there's a typo or two and 'rip/ripe old age' thing but certainly a good read and if there was more to click, I would have.