Hey Paul

[Howie Roary]

the white dude needs to look at the camera, along the lines of what kia said

the credits at the start need some work but only if you want anyone to be able to actually read the names in time; I suggest making the gamer tag/online alias be a different colour or even in a:

NAME
alias

type of format above, for ease of vision

also, at 43:## and change you managed to score a quick chat with 2 attractive chcisk, bonus -- utilize it, the chick with too much bangs was wasted in terms of visual opportunity

if new viewers are anything like me they watched about 6 sections of random clicked spots throughout the 48 minute program, new viewers are not going to sit through all that

the part I watched the longest? the chicks, use 'em if you got 'em, as they say but keep them facing the camera properly

[Deejay]

yeah, I don't think people are going to watch the whole thing, but if they find 2-3 segments worth their while, then i hope it will be enough to keep them coming back.

we're probably going to use a new, shorter intro to the show because 1:25 is a little on the long side. but i like your idea about using different colors or fonts for our alias

[Kiarax]

Out of curiosity, what made you wanna do it as one large show instead of individual episodes of each? I can't help but feel you'd get more people watching that way (since I'm guessing a lot of people will be put off by the length, as well as having to skip segments they don't care for), and it would let you stagger episodes a little better (say you were gonna do it once a week, you could upload 1 segment per day with one day free or something).

[Deejay]

Kia, that's the plan going forward. The first few episodes are just going to be put out there to give people a taste of what everyone wants to do. Later down, we plan to go WAY more in depth with each of our favorite games/hobbies.

Like, we want to do villain vs villain episodes for comics, or build orders/top tier strats in Starcraft, or character tutorials in street fighter... etc etc

Right now, we just want to be able to get our name out there, grow a decent amount of followers, and then start giving them the REAL shit

[Kiarax]

Fair enough. Subbed and I'll like all your shit, but I doubt my subs will be interested in it, lol.

[Linliel]

I liked the starcraft competition wrapups. They were pretty clever! That's about all I watched though. The anime guys took way too long to get anywhere. But I'm not exactly the target audience I guess

[Blarg]

During the anime section at the start it was very apparent there was a green screen being used and those 2 guys weren't actually in that bar/cafe with the anime people.

[Deejay]

really appreciate it! even if you have 1 or 2 friends that may have an interest in some of our stuff, just shoot them a link.

[Deejay]

During the anime section at the start it was very apparent there was a green screen being used and those 2 guys weren't actually in that bar/cafe with the anime people.

Way to ruin the illusion mr spoiler alerty pants

[Deejay]

I liked the starcraft competition wrapups. They were pretty clever! That's about all I watched though. The anime guys took way too long to get anywhere. But I'm not exactly the target audience I guess

No biggie! As long as felt like the Starcraft section was worth your click, then we're happy

[Genosync]

You ended with a RMX:CM song?

Instant motherfucking win.

Good stuff... the buttons for the sections should be available the whole entire video though. Sometimes people might want to start to watch a section, get bored, and want to flip to something else.

Tossing in video about things while people are talking about them should be done more. There is lot of face time "blah blah blah" and every time a video of something started I could relate more to what the person/people were talking about. The face-time is good, there's just a little bit too much of it.

I liked it though, skipped around a lot as it's pretty hefty video (longer than an episode of a show I'd watch)

[Blarg]

I'm still going through it but maybe in the future you can have each topic have their own video and then cut like a best of compilation video (like the most important parts of the individual videos are isolated and then put together) where all the topics are put together into 1 video. Why this may be good is that I started to watch some of the topics that I don't normally care much about but they went on too long and I skipped forward but maybe if they were shorter/more important best of pieces I would stick around to watch them and if I ended up liking it I could go watch that topics video.

[Blarg]

TV bit at the end seemed way too short and didn't add much. Either have more to say on the shows or cut it out, it seemed weird the way it was. Overall I think it was a good show so I'll check the second ep out.

[Deejay]

Cool, thanks for the feedback guys. I'm definitely going to relay everything you guys said to the rest of the crew this weekend.

[Deejay]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zorRl...=plpp_play_all

Episode 2 is up! They tried to incorporate a playlist format but I'm not sure if I like it. Let me know what you guys think :/

[tyven]

I WILL WATCH IT

[quannum]

its much better broken up like this.

[Deejay]

you think so? i was worried that it might be too convoluted for some people. it's probably a lot easier to navigate now so that is a plus

[Genosync]

Too tired to watch but the playlist thing is way better.

[Ksandra]

playlist is definitely better, but I'd say put something like "TG" in the titles of the show (on youtube) if you're going to stick to that format, or I think things are going to get messy after awhile.


Also wtf tv show spoilers when there's only two episodes out (referencing Once Upon a Time). It seems like they weren't reviewing anything and I got a big sense of "here's what the shows are about, and if you missed the first few eps well fuck you here's some spoilers".

Kinda a little late to be giving summariers as like even two broke girls I think are quite a few episodes in already. and then somewhat dickish to be giving spoilers to episodes that aired like 5 days ago.