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  1. #1

    history of vana'diel needs blue gartr

    ok, before I update the site...can you guys check out this file (especially those who completed the game) and check to see if anything needs changed or edited or rewritten to make the way I ended it better. (talking about sections 29-31)
    it's hard trying to write it all without having it include you character as to avoid sex/race/name issues ><;

    http://www.shadow-ffxi.com/HistoryofVan ... istory.txt

    thanks for the few of you showing an interest ^^

  2. #2

    wow

  3. #3

    Haha, nice to see you post man i've been reading your story for a while now, since for a while, (anyone that hasn't seen the older version
    http://www.thegenie.net/media/strategies/57.txt)

    Looking forward to reading this one.

  4. #4
    The God Damn Kuno
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    Typo:

    Protecting Windurst was less and 1000 - including cardians.

    ;x

    So far so good though. :3

    Edit: oh yeah

    With lift
    provided by unique revolving wings and propulsion supplied by the crystal
    engine, airships are capable of nearly vertical takeoffs and landings from
    their waterfront ports.Holding dozens of cannons, the "airship" as it was
    called, was the perfect siege weapon.

    need a space after that period.

  5. #5

    thanks, already editied now for 2.2 ^^

  6. #6
    Relic Weapons
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    Haven't finished it yet, but so far I'm really liking it. Very good job compiling info and well put into your own words^^

  7. #7

    thanks ^^

  8. #8
    BG is my LJ
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    I <3 you for this...

    Something enjoyable to do while lfp smn all day long! :D

  9. #9

    holy shit

  10. #10

    this is really nice read to get caught up in the storyline, for those who skip all the text when doing missions etc. .

  11. #11
    Black Belt
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    wow, this is really good. good job

  12. #12

    Best part of the history (I read it awhile ago) is when San D'Oria get The Last Samurai'd by Bastok in Konstatch(sp) Highlands. So like elves to run head first into rifle fire and retreat when only 27 of them are left lol

    stupid elves

  13. #13

    Quote Originally Posted by Elcura
    Best part of the history (I read it awhile ago) is when San D'Oria get The Last Samurai'd by Bastok in Konstatch(sp) Highlands. So like elves to run head first into rifle fire and retreat when only 27 of them are left lol

    stupid elves
    too bad they didnt kill them all

  14. #14
    Bagel
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    Nicely done you made me read and like it.....you get a /clap

  15. #15

    nothing too off....
    I'm trying to find points where the story gets confusing or when something doesn't seem right...

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