
Originally Posted by
Derock
I gave this another listen because it seems that I have upset you with what I said. I honestly wish I could say I've changed my mind, because I love hearing new music. The vibe remains pretty lackluster throughout the entire song. It seems you tried to spice things up a little bit with a few pauses here and there, but you use the same break almost the entire song which is one of the major killers for me. The clapping deal, while not really my thing, was actually well done within idea of the song, so I can feel ya there.
And what Nor was saying about the baseline not coming across right wasn't what I was really shooting for when I said my original statement. It's that the song just doesn't have any feeling to it. I get the notion that you don't actually enjoy music when I listen to the song, which is another major turn off for me. I can't listen to something that I don't think you can even listen to, basically.
Before you go and get all trollollolloll again, I mean what I just wrote. I'm not trying to be a dick to you, because I really don't have shit against you (so you like V-necks, big whoop) . I know it helps me become a better musician when people are critical about the music that I write, and I think it'd be unfair if I wasn't honest to you as well.