hey guys I need you to opine

[MF Perm tha Fineass]

never really tried my hand at making fliers before, what do you think? any insightful criticisms?

http://gallery.me.com/stephenpenders...12700964210001

http://gallery.me.com/stephenpenders...12700964230001

[Lyn]

I don't really like the fonts you used, everything else looks ok

[Qalbert]

move the FREQ logo

[MF Perm tha Fineass]

ya I have a feeling my wife is going to say the same thing lol

that was @lyn

[MF Perm tha Fineass]

move the FREQ logo

http://images.bluegartr.com/forum/cu...ar43834_40.gif

[Howard Roark]

yeah that s is grinding my gears

also 2nd one seems more washed out

[MF Perm tha Fineass]

any font recommendations and link to download?

[Cantih]

Or, at least, give us the original image
>.>

The washed out color is kinda =\ Maybe darken/enrichen/ w/e.

[Shojin]

comic sans

[MF Perm tha Fineass]

by popular request
http://gallery.me.com/stephenpenders...12700974250001

[Kazen]

any font recommendations and link to download?

Try dafont.com, they have a lot of free fonts you can download(and they let you search by style, Serif, Sans serif, etc). Also, I'd recommend you move the type on the bottom up a bit, most printers can't print to the edge like that unless you make use of full bleeds and margins.

[Cantih]

by popular request

Thank you.
Also, I'm popular?
wat

[MF Perm tha Fineass]

the only thing that strikes me is that i think i'd make the date/time/location a little larger or somehow make it more attention-grabbing. maybe change the color? i think i'd put the date/time in the lightest purple, then the name of the place in the darker one, and the address in black. or something. idk, play around with it.

ok cool, ty.

also it would be helpful to know which parts you think are of the most importance

mostly the logo's of the top two dj's and the placement of my logo over her exposed breast cannot be compromised, the font and placement is up for grabs although I'm very happy with how the placement works

also curious on how the various shades of pink/purple work in the setting

[MF Perm tha Fineass]

the fact that the colors were washed out didn't bother me. seems like it'd be hard to make any font read well against a picture that dark unless you defined the stroke and fill differently

ya I had to wash it out a bit because the fonts colors weren't doing so well against the dark shades and there was too much white to go for lighter shades and it gave to much conflict

[Howard Roark]

looks like less of a man now

[MF Perm tha Fineass]

Thank you.
Also, I'm popular?
wat

you and qal, more than one, popular demand, etc

[MF Perm tha Fineass]

looks like less of a man now

honestly if that is a tranny that just makes it a million times more awesome imo

[MF Perm tha Fineass]

Try dafont.com, they have a lot of free fonts you can download(and they let you search by style, Serif, Sans serif, etc). Also, I'd recommend you move the type on the bottom up a bit, most printers can't print to the edge like that unless you make use of full bleeds and margins.

nice one man, thx!

[Shojin]

is the dj you are doing this with a dude or a chick?

[MF Perm tha Fineass]

is the dj you are doing this with a dude or a chick?

It's my wife

And no this isn't nepotism she's actually quite good I can upload a recent mix she did for you all