
Originally Posted by
Kohan
Going by what you've written, I've a feeling that whatever you're going to write will be boring and passed over. You're probably wondering why I'd say something so harsh when I haven't read a word of it, but it has everything to do with your short-sighted analysis, and the presumed belief that a "common occurrence of comic relief" precludes something "drama and story related." You've also said that you're not worried about this being a "popularity contest," as if there were something wrong with comics that succeed.
If you've taken that personally and are already feeling defensive, you're also going to need a thicker skin, so add that to your list of things to work on.
Considering that you aren't interested in establishing an audience, and may not believe that humorous incidents can build character—even in a storyline with a legitimately serious tone—who are you writing for? Do you believe you can capably craft a completely serious tale that isn't painfully melodramatic and poorly paced? It isn't as if a straight-faced comic can't succeed, but it must be very well-done. Accessibility is important.
How do you intend to hook people? What will prevent the characters from being two-dimensional? Have you read any thorough analyses of what makes popular webcomics, well, so popular?